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Jealous

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"I just don't think its appropriate fro you to date a 14 year old kid!"

Katara's eyebrows go up. Waaayyyy up.

"Appropriate? Who are you to preach to ME about what's appropriate Firelord Zuko?"

"AND he's a monk. A MONK!!!"

". . .so?"

"Well", the young Firelord sputtered,"He's a MONK!!!"

"Yes, I believe you said that already" Katara said dryly, gazing at her nails.

"MONKS aren't supposed to. . .you know!"

Katara stared at him. Blue eyes flickering, she walks over to Zuko. Verrryyy slowly. When she reaches him, his face is extremely pink. She begins to play with his jacket buttons and grins up at him, coy.

"Why Firelord Zuko. . .are you jealous?"

Her grin gets even wider when she sees his entire body get very stiff.

"I'm not even--That's not--What are you--I'm don't think" Zuko stopped talking, turned and strode away.

Until Katara grabbed his arm, spun him around and kissed him full on the lips.
Day 3: Jealous. I couldn't sleep so I decided to post day 3 right now. So there.

Day One: Crossover [link]
Day Two: Blood [link]
Day Four: Cactus Juice [link]
Day Five: Fireflies
Day Six: Rhythm
Day Seven: Lick [link]
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dramaelfie's avatar
Here's a suggestion: When writing a fanfic, use only one verb tense. Here, you switched back and forth between past and present tense quite a few times. Staying in the same tense will make the piece much easier to read.

That aside, I thought it was very cute. :aww: